We were in love … so in love. It was summertime, it was the beginning of our lives—it was the end of our lives. She was a black-haired beauty, loving me as no one has ever loved me. The time spent with her was so sweet. Her soul, her smile, her everything … I loved her so much. So it’s funny how things worked out.
Her father did not approve of me; he thought me a loser … not good enough for his daughter. When I came a-calling, he would show his disapproval by addressing me as the bug he thought I was. Never a civil word did I get from him.
But she and I were in love. The old man didn’t matter … nothing mattered. We had each other.
We decided to run away … we were young and so in love.
I went to her house that night … that horrible night. She was to be outside waiting for me, but she wasn’t. Instead, her father met me and he had a gun in his hand.
I loved his daughter, and because of that, he pointed the gun at me and squeezed the trigger.
The gun misfired. Without thinking, I took it from him. Without thinking, I turned it and pointed it at him. Without thinking, I killed him. The weapon did not misfire for me. Although I wish it had.
Now I await my execution. I sit in a prison cell and every day I think of my black-haired beauty. And what might have been.
If anyone feels so inclined, I’d appreciate it if you’d like my Facebook page. You can click on the button on the right side of the page. Thank you.
https://plus.google.com/+AndrewJoyce76/posts/T7HEF6KkNjJ
Sounds like a gripping story
Thank you.
Sounds like a country song. (Or maybe that’s just because I’m packing moving boxes today and, obviously, that requires country music.)
Of course, packing requires country music.
Yipes!
Yipes?
Of course. Miss Annette is using the world-renown sniglet for “cripes” and “yikes.”
Holy smoke… as in gun smoke!
Every thing we do is a choice and every choice comes with a consequence.Hindsight at times comes too late. Sad.
You are so right.
Holy cripes! I’m glad you left out the backstory. I’d have had to go looking for a bridge to jump off…
Save the bridge jumping off of for my next story.
You are definitely a prolific writer. This is a better spot to stop and say, “Thanks for stopping by my website.” It’s almost time to get up here and I thought I’d read one last post before I went back to bed and I’m not on anything except lack of sleep. So, I started reading about Joannie. OMG. 21,500 words. I got half-way through, and will come back. You’re quite a character. 🙂
Thank you very kindly.
🙂